Academic writing development: a complex, dynamic process (2024)

Abstract

Traditionally we look at learning outcomes by examining single outcomes. A new and future direction is to look at the actual process of development. Imagine an advanced, 17-year-old student of English (L2) who has just finished secondary school in the Netherlands and wants to become an English teacher. He first completes a teacher training programme, and later at age 30, he obtains a university master’s degree in the Netherlands. After high school he is quite advanced already (estimated low B2 level), and when he finishes his MA thesis, he is able to write an academic research paper with the proper academic register (estimated C2 level). The purpose of the present chapter is to gain insight into the linguistic developmental process of his academic writing from a dynamic perspective. Over the course of 13 years (with a gap of five years), he writes many texts, 49 of which are selected to be examined in detail. The analyses show that his writing development is a long, complex, dynamic process, in which different sub-components of the language change in interaction with each other. During his teacher training programme the language develops substantially differently from his development during his university programme, where more of an academic register is expected. As the language develops, longer noun phrases occur, and more academic words appear, as reflected in a longer average word length. The linguistic system becomes more accurate as the process of acquisition continues, at one point quite abruptly, but even at the end of the participant’s studies, the writing still contains some errors. This study not only gives insight into the differences between characteristics of advanced formal writings and academic writing, but also has implications for the assessment and measurement of linguistic development. It turns out that not a single dependent variable develops linearly, and they all may level off during development. However, at the end, we will suggest that the finite verb token ratio is the best overall complexity and sophistication developmental measure, as it correlates highly with all other variables.

Original languageEnglish
Title of host publicationFuture Research Directions for Applied Linguistics
EditorsSimone Pfenniger, Judit Navracsics
Place of PublicationBristol ; Tonawanda, NY ; North York, Ontario
PublisherMultilingual Matters Ltd
Pages215-242
Number of pages27
ISBN (Print)9781783097128
Publication statusPublished - 2017

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NameSecond language acquisition
PublisherMultilingual Matters
Volume109

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Penris, W., & Verspoor, M. (2017). Academic writing development: a complex, dynamic process. In S. Pfenniger, & J. Navracsics (Eds.), Future Research Directions for Applied Linguistics (pp. 215-242). (Second language acquisition; Vol. 109). Multilingual Matters Ltd.

Penris, Wouter ; Verspoor, Marjolijn. / Academic writing development: a complex, dynamic process. Future Research Directions for Applied Linguistics . editor / Simone Pfenniger ; Judit Navracsics. Bristol ; Tonawanda, NY ; North York, Ontario : Multilingual Matters Ltd, 2017. pp. 215-242 (Second language acquisition).

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Penris, W & Verspoor, M 2017, Academic writing development: a complex, dynamic process. in S Pfenniger & J Navracsics (eds), Future Research Directions for Applied Linguistics . Second language acquisition, vol. 109, Multilingual Matters Ltd, Bristol ; Tonawanda, NY ; North York, Ontario , pp. 215-242.

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Future Research Directions for Applied Linguistics . ed. / Simone Pfenniger; Judit Navracsics. Bristol ; Tonawanda, NY ; North York, Ontario : Multilingual Matters Ltd, 2017. p. 215-242 (Second language acquisition; Vol. 109).

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Academic writing development: a complex, dynamic process (2024)

FAQs

What makes academic writing complex? ›

It has more subordinate clauses, more "that/to" complement clauses, more long sequences of prepositional phrases, more attributive adjectives and more passives than spoken language. Written texts are shorter and have longer, more complex words and phrases.

What is the process of academic writing? ›

The general steps are: discovery\investigation, prewriting, drafting, revising, and editing.

How do you add complexity to academic writing? ›

The common expectation on the complexity of academic texts is usually the use of technical terms that define the discipline. These terms are often used to label tools and instruments, identify phenomena, name events and happenings, and so on, in the forms of nouns.

Why is academic writing difficult? ›

Academic writing adorns itself with several attributes. Some of these include objectivity, complexity, formal tone, and straightforwardness. And it is these (and a few more) attributes that hinder scholars from shifting to the academic way of writing.

What is the complex process of writing? ›

Writing is a complex process that requires multiple drafts to achieve a finished, polished product. Prewriting is the first step of the writing process. During this process, ideas related to your topic are explored, noted, and organized. First, examine your writing assignment instructions carefully.

What is the most complex writing process? ›

Often the most difficult part of writing is starting to write. The process of choosing a broad topic and narrowing it down to a thesis can be both daunting and frustrating.

What are the 7 stages of academic writing? ›

The writing process, according to the EEF's ​'Improving Literacy In Key Stage 2' guidance report, can be broken down into 7 stages: Planning, Drafting, Sharing, Evaluating,Revising, Editing and Publishing.

What are the 5 processes in academic writing? ›

The Writing Process
  • Step 1: Prewriting. Think and Decide. Make sure you understand your assignment. ...
  • Step 2: Research (if needed) Search. List places where you can find information. ...
  • Step 3: Drafting. Write. ...
  • Step 4: Revising. Make it Better. ...
  • Step 5: Editing and Proofreading. Make it Correct.

What are the 4 processes of academic writing? ›

Writing is a process that involves at least four distinct steps: prewriting, drafting, revising, and editing. It is known as a recursive process. While you are revising, you might have to return to the prewriting step to develop and expand your ideas.

Should academic writing be complex? ›

It doesn't mean using lots of long words and complicated sentences! The purpose of academic writing is to communicate complex ideas in a way that makes them least likely to be challenged. So it's important to avoid any ambiguity.

What does complexity mean in writing? ›

It can mean two different things. One is related to the argument, and means that the writer has clearly done an effective literature search and has taken into account multiple dimensions of the argument at hand. The other meaning applies to the language, sentence structure, and method of delivery.

How do I improve my academic writing? ›

Nine Basic Ways to Improve Your Style in Academic Writing
  1. Use ACTIVE VOICE. ...
  2. Mix it up in terms of PUNCTUATION. ...
  3. Vary your SENTENCE STRUCTURE. ...
  4. Closely related to this, avoid CHOPPINESS. ...
  5. Avoid REPETITION.
  6. Be CONCISE.
  7. Use the VOCABULARY that you know.
  8. But also work on expanding your VOCABULARY.

What are the six common problem in academic writing? ›

These are Audience, Purpose, Organization, Style, Flow and Presentation.

What is the biggest challenge in academic writing? ›

1 Language issues

One of the most common academic writing challenges is language issues, which can include grammar, vocabulary, spelling, punctuation, and coherence. These issues can make your writing unclear, confusing, or unprofessional; they can also lead to plagiarism or misunderstanding.

What is the hardest thing in academic writing? ›

Some sections of an academic text are easier to write than others. The hardest tend to be those placed at both ends of the paper (introduction and conclusion). Those are meant to set the scene and wrap the whole, respectively, and are crucial in shaping readers' impressions on your work.

What is an academic text complexity? ›

Text complexity can be defined as the level of difficulty in reading and understanding a text based a series of factors: the readability of the text, the levels of meaning or purpose in the text, the structure of the text, the conventionality and clarity of the language, and the knowledge demands of the text.

What are the 5 characteristics of an academic writing? ›

Features of academic writing
  • Complexity. Written language is relatively more complex than spoken language. ...
  • Formality. Academic writing is relatively formal. ...
  • Precision. In academic writing, facts and figures are given precisely. ...
  • Objectivity. ...
  • Explicitness. ...
  • Accuracy. ...
  • Hedging. ...
  • Responsibility.

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